The average temperatures

Essay topics:

The average temperatures

The presented line chart compares the temperatures per moth in three different cities, namely Paris, Boston and Melboume during a year.
It can be seen clearly that the highest temperature in Boston and Paris fall into Aug while Jul is the month which have the lowest temperature in Melboume.
Firstly, on Jan, the average temperatures in Melboume was above 25, fifth as high as in Boston and more than 18 in Paris. From Jan to Apr, this temperature in Boston and Paris increased significantly, at 16 and 14 respectively; whereas one in Melboume dropped slightly to 22. The average temperature climbed approximately to 30 on Jul in Boston, compared to that of in Melboume, at above 15. Meanwhile, this figure in Paris was nearly 25.
Secondly, in Aug, while the temperature in Boston leaped to a new peak 32, one in Paris stayed constant at 23. Besides, there is a small increase in the temperature of Melboume, at 17. In the last four months, Boston experienced a dramatical decline to 5 while the temperature in Melboume reached at peak above 25. At the same time, the average temperature in Paris decreased at under 10.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81443298969 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89330957587 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561855670103 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3947670438 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356186127829 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164332929416 0.103423049105 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0957251337382 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216269595881 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754838177127 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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