The bar chart below shows the percentage of population playing ten top sports in Canada in 1998 and 2005.

Essay topics: The bar chart below shows the percentage of population playing ten top sports in Canada in 1998 and 2005.

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The bar chart compares the proportion of the Canadian who took part in ten most popular sports in two separate years 1998 and 2005.

It is clear from the given chart that golf was by far the most attractive sport. The most significant change was seen in baseball after 7 years period, while others saw a minor changes.

In 1998, nearly 22 per cent of Cacada residents chose to play golf, which was considerably higher than the rest sports, followed by a slight rise to 23 per cent in 2005. This upward trend also saw in cycling and soccer, which players increased to 6 per cent and 10 per cent, respectively in the final year surveyed.

Baseball witnessed the largest gap between two years in terms of people joining this sport, which approximately a half of those players did not go for this sport after 7 years. Ice hockey, similarly, although attracted almost 18 per cent population in 1998, saw a downward tendency to around 17 per cent in 2005. The percentage of those people were involved in the rest of top ten sports also reduced by about a mere 2 per cent after 7 years period surveyed, namely tennis, downhill skiing, volleyball, basketball, and swimming.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, similarly, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 969.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70388349515 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51705933751 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7427273221 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.125 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19829894942 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896381920301 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759574180691 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130592527627 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831645043268 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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