The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows three different computer packages were downloaded with in the time period of 5 weeks. Looking at the overall trend it is clearly visible that computer package ActiveX always remains popular in comparison to other who tries to beat this software from time to time.
In the first week ActiveX was downloaded almost double in comparison to Net which was downloaded only 38000 times, whereas Java was also popular at the same time. With time ActiveX become more popular and gradually downloaded more, and at the same time Java was also in demand. Considering the trend in week 2 where ActiveX, was downloaded almost double in comparison to Java. In the following week Java get downloaded more; however the ActiveX still remain leader in the industry. By the fifth week ActiveX remain ahead and Java remains behind.
Whereas the package which was least downloaded was Net, which had a good start but the next two weeks was not that good, as in its reached at the level of 10000 which was the lowest ever level. However with week 4 gradually it improve and achieved the level of 40000 and finally closed at the level of 45000 in the last week.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... 10000 which was the lowest ever level. However with week 4 gradually it improve and ac...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'improves'?
Suggestion: improves
...level. However with week 4 gradually it improve and achieved the level of 40000 and fin...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, so, still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74384236453 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27111226782 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527093596059 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7411376874 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5555555556 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195995473137 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109061192332 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0991735378548 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158836494629 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10553665779 0.0819641961636 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.