The bar shows numbers of marriages and divorces and marital status in 30 years from 1970 in America.

Essay topics:

The bar shows numbers of marriages and divorces and marital status in 30 years from 1970 in America.

The bar charts illustrate how many marriages and divorces and marital status of the USA adult over the period of 30 years from 1970.
Overall, it is clear from the paragraph that the number of marriages was about twice as many as the divorces. The second chart shows that the married adults accounted for the highest proportion.
Looking at the graph in more detail, the marriages remained steady from 1970 to 1980. However, this feature was influenced by a decreasing trend and fell slightly to 2 millions cases in the year of 2000. In contrast, the number of divorces display a fluctuation during this time duration. The divorcing rate rose to reach its peak at just under 1.5 millions and then went down to 1 in 2000.
The percentage of married and widowed experienced a downward trend, while other two features climbed up. In 2000, the three most significant marital status are married, never married and divorced, respectively.

Votes
Average: 10 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, second, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92405063291 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59740543265 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670886075949 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.3622914957 43.030603864 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.4444444444 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366856024472 0.215688989381 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12327839762 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131257588734 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210815578537 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153324301875 0.0819641961636 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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