The chart below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.
The bar chart illustrates the participation at three different venues and the table shows a variety prices of those places in 2009.
Overall, it can be seen that cinemas was the most popular place to entertainment in the year 2009, also football game – AFL accounted for the most expensive ticket both for an individual or a group family.
In the first bar chart, more than 1000 people enjoyed watching movie at cinemas. In contrast, just under 200 people went to sports venues for entertainment. In addition, theme parks was the second popular place of entertainment, which was at around 390 people.
In the table, football game – AFL made up the biggest price ticket for per person and for four family members, which was at $75 and $298 respectively. In contrast, the cheapest ticket can be seen in the cinema term, only $15 per person and $55 for a family group. Most of the prices of events for family group were cheaper than the individual one, compared to the kind of event, except for theme parks event.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
...contrast, just under 200 people went to sports venues for entertainment. In addition, ...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ent to sports venues for entertainment. In addition, theme parks was the second po...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ment, which was at around 390 people. In the table, football game – AFL made up ...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rs, which was at 5 and 98 respectively. In contrast, the cheapest ticket can be se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, except for, in addition, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70786516854 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57580440588 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578651685393 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.227478171 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154981885601 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784879255361 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0879973638041 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124529615362 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105044482052 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.