The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The presented bar graph demonstrates data about birth and death numbers of Switzerland population over the period of 50 years, starting from 1970 to 2020. Units are measured in millions for each one year.
The most striking feature to be observed is that, it is expected that the birth rate will follow an upward trend over the period given, however, the death rate will experience a fluctuant trend. Besides, the difference between the numbers of dying and who were born in Switzerland will become the most in 2020.
Looking at the data in more details, it is clear that in 1970 and 1980, rate of births was lowest point, standing at 1.2m and during three decades this figure rose remarkably and in 2010, reach the point of 3m. It is estimated that this growth will continue until 2020 and hit the peak birth number of 3.2m for country.
Turning to the rest of description, from 1970 to 1990, mortality level witnessed an increase trend, which rose gradually from 1 million to 1.5 million.After that, figure saw a tremendous fall and experts are predicting that compare to 1990, there will be about 50% decrease in 2020.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84615384615 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45331961234 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610256410256 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4342854857 43.030603864 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168602458855 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773526791041 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446304414856 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104867392047 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414659669937 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.