The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The Provided chart show the number of leisure hours enjoyed by male and female of different employment levels in year 1998-99.
As can be clearly seen from graph, unemployment and retired categories females enjoyed same leisure hours 78 than the other type of employment females. Among all full time employed people, men had about 35 hours of free time on an average week compare to 38 hours free time for women. There is no data given for part time employed in male category but females for same category had 40 hours leisure time.
Moreover, unemployed and retired people had longest period of free activity both men and females but men had bit more hours than females. Lastly, housewives spent approximately 50 hours of leisure time which is more than part-time and full-time females but less than unemployed and retired females. the graph shows that men had more leisure time than females in all employment statues while women spent more time working at home.
In conclusion , it is noticed that in the part-time employed status, the amount of leisure time for the men was zero, while females enjoyed 40 hours per week. Also, unemployed and retired people had more leisure time than other employment statues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...r type of employment females. Among all full time employed people, men had about 35 hours...
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Line 3, column 313, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e for women. There is no data given for part time employed in male category but females f...
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Line 5, column 41, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the longest'.
Suggestion: had the longest
...Moreover, unemployed and retired people had longest period of free activity both men and fe...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ss than unemployed and retired females. the graph shows that men had more leisure t...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e time working at home. In conclusion , it is noticed that in the part-time emp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, moreover, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99509803922 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37471310769 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.547539520022 94% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.008522668 43.030603864 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.222222222 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364340630199 0.215688989381 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184044171092 0.103423049105 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087209033012 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263328167962 0.15604864568 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054507254869 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.