The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK.

Essay topics: The chart below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15-year-olds spend chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school day in the UK.

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The chart compares the time spent on chatting online and playing on game consoles by younger people who aged betwenn 10-15 in the UK.
In general, playing on games consoles for both boys and girls is the most popular activities than chatting on the internet (68% as against 62%).
In terms of chat online, girls make up a higher percentage of spending time on chating online than Boys with around 68% and 54% respectively. The proportion of girls used 4 hours or plus in chatting on the internet was 8% which was twice as high as that of boys. However, the pattern is the complete reverse when it comes to Playing on computer game. 85% of boys spent on playing games console while girls accounted for nearly 52% on that. The rate of boys used 1-3 hours was 34% as opposed on this, girls only comprised 13% in playing on game console. With approximate 10% of boys spent on 4 hours or plus in playing on games console was a much higher than that of girls (10% in comparision with 2%).

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Suggestion:
...game consoles by younger people who aged betwenn 10-15 in the UK. In general, pl...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'so', 'while', 'in general']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273170731707 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.131707317073 0.116061578633 113% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0682926829268 0.0759168565197 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0487804878049 0.0366838410393 133% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00487804878049 0.0131127313244 37% => OK
Prepositions: 0.20487804878 0.155750635184 132% => OK
Participles: 0.0682926829268 0.0379272487307 180% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.31659771009 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00487804878049 0.0210936926555 23% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00487804878049 0.00175180941692 278% => OK
Determiners: 0.0829268292683 0.0948980150116 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0146341463415 0.00967000014798 151% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 983.0 1161.00487805 85% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.9 92% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43093922652 5.90752243213 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.254143646409 0.337110787985 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21546961326 0.247514529752 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.121546961326 0.171178102325 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0441988950276 0.112407865282 39% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.31659771009 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530386740331 0.546246751206 97% => OK
Word variations: 45.1645837434 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 22.625 23.0094962315 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.6867251934 42.9750493124 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.875 135.714022679 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 23.0094962315 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 44.171961326 47.7609492067 92% => OK
Elegance: 2.94736842105 2.94281807926 100% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.520571869846 0.418131533498 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.170414245495 0.181151798455 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.077893771472 0.0850326197045 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.683203420829 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.216543205125 0.157042692854 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.289714452821 0.228904883108 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116916462976 0.108899403657 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.366410517747 0.367819155151 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0409803996028 0.0812612215331 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.440178064914 0.316326947829 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654377397047 0.0921553760075 71% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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