The chart below shows the percentage of films produced by 5 different countries in 3 years

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The chart below shows the percentage of films produced by 5 different countries in 3 years.

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of films made by 5 different nations, namely A, B, C, D and E from 2007 to 2009.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of films produced by 3 countries increased whereas the figures for C fluctuated through the period. The proportion of films made by A was higher than those of other countries, despite a gradual decline.
In 2007, the percentage of films produced by A was the highest point, at 80%, then there were steady decline to 88% in 2008 and to 86% in the next year. In contrast, the figures for C fluctuated during 3 years, at about 20% in 2007 then this went up steadily by 2% in 2008 before falling lower percentage in 2009, at 18%.
There were similar trend for B, D and E. In 2007, the proportion of films made by B was 34% compared with 12% of C and less than 5% of E which was the lowest figure on the whole graph. In next two years, the figures for B increased to 36% and 50%, respectively. While there was a gradual growth in D, at 14% in 2008 and at 15% in 2009. The percentage of films produced by E were at 6% in 2008 and approximately 8% in 2009, these figures were lower 10% during a 3-year period.

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Average: 6.7 (5 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, whereas, while, in contrast, on the whole

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20888888889 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54404751877 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497777777778 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0850354995 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218957385631 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897452960049 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719898923662 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151120428239 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354808246479 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 11.4140731707 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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