The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

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The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

The bar chart compares the proportion of gender of teachers in six kinds of educational in the UK in 2010
It is clear from the bar chart that women taught more in a lower educational setting. Additionally, men took part more in teaching higher levels of educational during the research period.
In nursery/pre-school and primary school, the rate of women in these two levels was highest at 97% and 92%, While the figure for men was significantly lower, at 4% and 8 % respectively. At secondary school and college, the gap between males and females represented were nearly equal.
By contrast, the percentage of men in university was higher than women approximately 70%, whereas about 30% of women. Meanwhile, private training institutes had 54% male teachers and 46% female teachers.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 658.0 965.302439024 68% => OK
No of words: 129.0 196.424390244 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1007751938 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 3.73543355544 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10826346617 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682170542636 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2605157415 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207845113987 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941398494539 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882432634485 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141526615315 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107990278727 0.0819641961636 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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