The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after 5 years

The pie chart demonstrates what Anthropology graduates did after completing their undergraduation, and the table provides information about the different salaries in work-force after five years.
Overall, dominant part of the graduates went into full time work, and in work-force, government employees earned more than other sectors ( Freelance consultants and private companies ).
More specifically, about slightly more than 50 percent of graduates started to work full time, whereas, the ones who were simultaneously working part-time and studying postgrad were merely 5 percent which is the least of all the categories. There were about 15 percent of people in part time work and approximately 12 percent did not find any job. The percentage of people whose whereabouts were unknown and into full-time postgrad were identical ( 8 percent ).
Moreover, the graduates entered into three distinct types of jobs namely freelance, governmental, and private sectors. In those, close to 50 percent of government employees earned more than 100 thousand dollars. Furthermore, in the upper range category which was from 75 to 99 thousand dollars, freelance jobholders had 40 percent in it. Most of the private company employees were between 50 to 75 thousand dollars..

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ominant part of the graduates went into full time work, and in work-force, government emp...
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...employees earned more than other sectors Freelance consultants and private compan...
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...elance consultants and private companies . More specifically, about slightly more...
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...d into full-time postgrad were identical 8 percent . Moreover, the graduates ent...
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...s were between 50 to 75 thousand dollars..
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59685863874 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05243358672 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612565445026 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2078794091 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.777777778 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147047934084 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641814447671 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10268717489 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122084093855 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130152267778 0.0819641961636 159% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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