The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduated degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years.
The two pictures given illustrate different options in proportions of Anthropology students from one university and the salary distribution in three types of employment five years later.
Overall, more than 50% of graduated students do full-time work and a large number of them have an average income of over a hundred thousand dollars.
As can be seen from the pie chart, the highest figure of student's destination is to do full-time work, with 52%, followed by much lower with 15%doing part-time work. Other choices such as unemployed, full-time postgrad study, unknown, and part-time work/postgrad study, take the proportion in order with 12%, 8%, 8%, and 5% respectively.
Regarding the table, 80% of employees who work as freelance consultants receive a wage higher than 75 thousand dollars, as the same as ones who are in the government sector. However, those who work in private companies have the largest percentage with 35% being paid between 50 thousand to 75 thousand dollars, followed by 30% of workers over 100 thousand, and one-fourth belong to the group 75 to 100 thousand dollars.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...raduated students do full-time work and a large number of them have an average income of over a h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1797752809 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87785251474 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64606741573 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.6304133538 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.666666667 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6666666667 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114350342653 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633857122479 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529074845157 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792765158355 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561250802409 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.