The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world’s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures illustrate how the biggest cities in the world increased their population during a period of sixty years. Additionally, a layout is displayed considering rural and urban inhabitants.
Overall, it is seen that the world population is increasing every year and Tokyo was the only city with the highest population in every period.
Talking about Tokyo, the graph showed it that was the city with the highest population over 15 million in 1970, whereas Jakarta reached almost 2.5 million in the same year. Then, in 1990, Tokyo stood again the top accounting for almost 25 million. In contrast, Jakarta nearly got less than 10 million.
On the other hand, the only american city, New York, with 12.5 inhabitants, represented more than all the population of Moscow and Paris together (5.3 million each).
Finally, if the population in rural and urban areas is analyzed, it is seen that the first one was increasing from 1980 to 2010, meanwhile, the second one was growing up from 1980 to 2010 but, since that year, it started decreasing. It was at 2 billion in 1990 which was almost double in 2010 whereas the rural population was steady in its growth and reached 3.2 billion.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, then, whereas, while, in contrast, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95024875622 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55301938351 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592039800995 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3488403382 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.555555556 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 5.23603664747 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172980541334 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731042518086 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475319682191 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101805068082 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044988310813 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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