The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of films in the USA in 2010

Essay topics:

The charts below show the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of films in the USA in 2010.

The bar graph compares the rate of choices between men and women for the most popular films via seven categories in 2010 while the pie chart depicts the expenditure for distinct means of films in the USA in the same period.
As can be seen, there was a noticeable correlation between the choices of generation and the ticket sales.
To be more specific, commencing at 40 units, the percentage of action film choosing by men, which was the highest in the graph, doubled that of women, and a similar pattern can be seen at thriller and science fiction. Conversely, romantic comedy shows that the proportion of women was remarkably higher than that of men, which was merely at 5 units. It is clear that the rate of women was equal to that of men in comedy and western.
Regard the pie chart, the percentage of the expenditure for action film was the highest at half of the ticket sales, followed by the figure for comedy at roughly a quarter. Other film just accounted for a minority proportion, especially 12 percent for romantic comedy and 10 percent for horror films. Finally, the proportion of other films was the lowest at merely 5 percent.

Votes
Average: 5.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68316831683 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52152774065 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519801980198 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5607132141 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.25 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32571174409 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143649209535 0.103423049105 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109079361645 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196353711429 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134706938489 0.0819641961636 164% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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