The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The pie charts depict the usage of water for various purposes in six areas of the world. The spectacular feature of the chart is a paramount consumption of water in the agricultural sector.

To embark with, North America and Europe utilized almost 50% of water for the industrial field while other countries devoted a small proportion to an industry which ranges from 5-12%. However, only 7% water was used for the household activities in Central Asia and South East Asia while almost a quarter of water was consumed by South America for the similar purpose.

Moving further, a supreme amount of water went in the agricultural fields of Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia. On the contrary, 35% of an average was used in North America and Europe while this percentage was doubled in case of South America.

Overall, Asians as well as African countries used maximum water in agricultural purpose whereas North America and Europe utilized for Industry.

Votes
Average: 8.1 (3 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, whereas, while, as well as, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03125 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54545397474 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55625 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6633959734 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275673094603 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147469303473 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127351429797 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190042217487 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115774364779 0.0819641961636 141% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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