The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

Essay topics:

The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.

There are several similarities between what younger and older people say makes them most happy. However, there are several striking differences.

Firstly, let us look at the similarities. It is noticeable that for both younger and older people, the highest percentage says that achievement at work brings them most happiness: 31% for the younger age group and 32% for the older group. Doing hobbies is also very important for both groups: the second largest percentage of both age groups mention doing hobbies as making them most happy.

Turning now to the differences, many younger people regard having a good appearance as extremely important: 18% of them state this brings them most happiness. This is followed by 15% who state that travel brings them happiness. Neither of these two factors is mentioned by older people. Instead, 20% of older people report that having financial security is most important to their happiness and 14% say they feel most happy when they are with their family.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.204301075269 0.268076937826 76% => OK
Verbs: 0.155913978495 0.116061578633 134% => OK
Adjectives: 0.155913978495 0.0759168565197 205% => Less adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0483870967742 0.0366838410393 132% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0645161290323 0.0131127313244 492% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102150537634 0.155750635184 66% => OK
Participles: 0.0430107526882 0.0379272487307 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51817885298 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.010752688172 0.0210936926555 51% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0698924731183 0.0948980150116 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0215053763441 0.00967000014798 222% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 998.0 1161.00487805 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.9 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.1226993865 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.374233128834 0.337110787985 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269938650307 0.247514529752 109% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.153374233129 0.171178102325 90% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116564417178 0.112407865282 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51817885298 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601226993865 0.546246751206 110% => OK
Word variations: 53.5032696448 49.3433353143 108% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1111111111 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9324990005 42.9750493124 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.888888889 135.714022679 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.689975730869 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 45.1049761418 47.7609492067 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.3 2.94281807926 44% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32018172728 0.418131533498 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.164431265168 0.181151798455 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0885608744425 0.0850326197045 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.579849773685 0.706616315825 82% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166695123975 0.157042692854 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131684119568 0.228904883108 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078053977903 0.108899403657 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.19008518132 0.367819155151 52% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0652847630677 0.0812612215331 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210931660711 0.316326947829 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390735772846 0.0921553760075 42% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.