Health and its care are a very important issue in our modern society. Nowadays, we do not only survive and reproduce, like many years ago, but have other concerns like improving our health and the sustainability of the planet, for example.In the following paragraphs I will share my point of view in what are the possible causes of todays children not being as fit and healthy as in the past.
Firstly, I start by addressing the topic with the most expected reason why children nowadays have not healthy lifestyles compared with the past; The technological evolution is a powerful substitute for the many possible activities children used to play outside. Like playing soccer and other sport, now can be played in videogames. In fact, less and less kids today play outside activities during their free time, which also tends to influence more this tendency.
Another possible cause that explains the topic being discussed is the fact that todays parents are overly protected towards their children and don´t want them to get hurt during any physical activity.
When adressing health, not only physical activity should play a role but also nutrition. Unfortunately, nowadays children eating habits are worse by the day. Fast food and other heavelly processed foods play a big role in children nutrition.
In order to solve this problem, children and parents should consider droping down the computers and smart phones and invest more time in outdoor physical activities as a way of living. Governament should also incentivate people to procede this way through financial, or other benefits.
In summary, the high tech world with a more and more fast food nutrition as contributed to the loss of the healthfull and fitness of past genarations. To correct this problem society should consider change their habits, either through single individuals or incentives of the governament and other agencies.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, for example, in fact, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 965.302439024 166% => OK
No of words: 308.0 196.424390244 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19480519481 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69190894276 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 106.607317073 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 283.868780488 173% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.874523138 43.030603864 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223302911039 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665202857556 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641568225745 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106414303927 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463078938213 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 40.7170731707 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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