The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
The graph illustrates data on unpaid work done by cuss and woman in different categories.
It is apparent from the graph that, Married woman doing unpaid work without children by 30 hours, when man only do 19 hours. After that, with increase children work of woman also swelled and for Wight it’s vice versa. Albeit, with 1-2 children woman's do 50 hours unpaid work, where cuss done only 18 hours. Moreover, 60 hours unpaid work done by married woman in 3+ children categories. The graph also said that, man’s unpaid work gradually falls down with swelled children. So, with 3+ children man spend 16 hours unpaid work.
All in all, It is evident that, Wight unpaid activity gradually decrease with no of children and woman activity jumped up with no of children's.
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...ldren man spend 16 hours unpaid work. All in all, It is evident that, Wight un...
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...ldren and woman activity jumped up with no of childrens.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'well']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.303797468354 0.268076937826 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.101265822785 0.116061578633 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0886075949367 0.0759168565197 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0506329113924 0.0366838410393 138% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0189873417722 0.0131127313244 145% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145569620253 0.155750635184 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0253164556962 0.0379272487307 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.31753803697 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0126582278481 0.00175180941692 723% => OK
Determiners: 0.0506329113924 0.0948980150116 53% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0126582278481 0.00967000014798 131% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 856.0 1161.00487805 74% => OK
No of words: 132.0 196.9 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.48484848485 5.90752243213 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.73763899035 91% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.318181818182 0.337110787985 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.219696969697 0.247514529752 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166666666667 0.171178102325 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0833333333333 0.112407865282 74% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31753803697 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55303030303 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 42.6447702115 49.3433353143 86% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.0768096208 42.9750493124 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 135.714022679 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 23.0094962315 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.689975730869 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.48048780488 405% => OK
Readability: 38.4696969697 47.7609492067 81% => OK
Elegance: 2.77777777778 2.94281807926 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32191295323 0.418131533498 77% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145766910226 0.181151798455 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0659831624164 0.0850326197045 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.6843899789 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.189684363475 0.157042692854 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18876483168 0.228904883108 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0961141652321 0.108899403657 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.266065380524 0.367819155151 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0285731674261 0.0812612215331 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257211314853 0.316326947829 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11940019853 0.0921553760075 130% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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