The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.
The graph provided reveals the information on a number of hours of unpaid work per week carried out by married women and men . In this case, unpaid work deals with caring after children, household and gardening as well. Overall, the statistics represents three categories of male and female having 1-2 children, 3 and more children as well as families without children.
As is observed, the category of married women without children have 30 hours a week for the household, while the women caring after 1-2 children have a figure twice more than the latter, but less approximately by 5 hours than married women with 3 or more infants. On the other hand, the married men engaged in household or caring of children have amount of hours declining within the given categories, that is without children- 18 hours, with 1-2 children-slightly less than the previous ones and the last category’s men have also less by roughly 1 point than men with 1-2 kids.
Generally speaking, unpaid work is fulfilled by married women of all categories considerably more than men of the same categories. Moreover, it should be said, that number of hours of female rockets beginning with women without kids reaching a peak of amount 58 hours. Whereas, the male become as more free as more children they have.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eek carried out by married women and men . In this case, unpaid work deals with ca...
^^
Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d, the category of married women without children have 30 hours a week for the ho...
^^
Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'amounted'.
Suggestion: amounted
...in household or caring of children have amount of hours declining within the given cat...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 498, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...slightly less than the previous ones and the last category's men have also l...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'moreover', 'so', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274590163934 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.106557377049 0.116061578633 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0983606557377 0.0759168565197 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0655737704918 0.0366838410393 179% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00819672131148 0.0131127313244 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.180327868852 0.155750635184 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0532786885246 0.0379272487307 140% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73664971885 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00409836065574 0.00175180941692 234% => OK
Determiners: 0.0860655737705 0.0948980150116 91% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00409836065574 0.00437022459523 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1297.0 1161.00487805 112% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.9 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.92237442922 5.90752243213 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73763899035 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.337110787985 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.246575342466 0.247514529752 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178082191781 0.171178102325 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118721461187 0.112407865282 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73664971885 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.546246751206 95% => OK
Word variations: 47.1267008356 49.3433353143 96% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 27.375 23.0094962315 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7817275131 42.9750493124 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.125 135.714022679 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 23.0094962315 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.689975730869 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.48048780488 270% => OK
Readability: 52.0325342466 47.7609492067 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.81818181818 2.94281807926 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344109965789 0.418131533498 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.212492585621 0.181151798455 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.143291440391 0.0850326197045 169% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.639948864503 0.706616315825 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.152514058106 0.157042692854 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193253228999 0.228904883108 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0838125206566 0.108899403657 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.439209329148 0.367819155151 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0126974071127 0.0812612215331 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277339749087 0.316326947829 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573235386693 0.0921553760075 62% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.