The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)

The infographic presents information on the average hours of such unpaid activities as childcare, housework and gardening per week conducted by married women and men.

As can be seen, there is an inversely proportional link between the women and men. The women without any children have 30 hours weekly on the activities, whereas their counterparts spend slightly less than 20 hours per week. In the second group, where the people have 1-2 children, the figure increases substantially to just over 50 hours for the women; in contrast, the figure remains unchanged for the men. Interestingly, in the last category (with over 3 children), the figure goes up further at approximately 55 hours for the women, while the men in this group allocate nearly 15 hours weekly to the activities.

The bar chart indicates that the women tend to spend more time to the unpaid activities than that of for the men in the all categories.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t of for the men in the all categories.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalization wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 770.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81460439828 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.114634146341 872% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0956803525 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8333333333 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182040111845 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101641431683 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886931175006 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16123251608 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832084377307 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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