The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

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The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn

The diagram illustrates the process of making ethanol fuel which is made from corn.
In general, there are eight stages in total, beginning with storing corn, which is the natural material and ending with the transportation of the completed product to the business market. In addition, there are three of eight steps last long many hours, while others can be done immediately.
As can be seen from the diagram, firstly, the raw corn is stored, ready for the next stage, which is milling the combination. Afterwards, it is mixed with water and cooked for 4 hours. The next step is transporting cooked corn to fermenting until exactly 48 hours.
Regarding the next stage, it is divided into two distinct groups, such as a solid by-product and liquid. Following being the liquid, it is purified to create ethanol, which takes for 5 hours before being stored. Finally, the finished ethanol fuel is transported to be sold for costumers.

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Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, regarding, so, while, in addition, in general, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96815286624 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63238474972 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636942675159 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.480128328 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 5.23603664747 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180861427382 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859784839415 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109348673359 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147018104302 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127360230034 0.0819641961636 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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