The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram demonstrates how instant noodles are produced in an industry.

Overall, the drawing portrays the process from the very inception to the last phase of production, and there are 8 steps in manufacturing instant noodles. The very first stage of production is storaging silos and the last stage is labelling and sealing the noodle cups.

More specifically, it starts from storing silos from raw flour, then it goes to a mixer where water and oil are added to it. After that, mixer produces dough of sheets which are rolled and cut into dough strips. Furthermore, the dough strips are transformed into circular shapes called noodles discs. Then, these discs are cooked with oil and dried . Moreover, these cooked noodles are put into cups where a phase of amalgamation occurs which is consisted of vegetables and spices. Then, we are into the last phase of manufacturing, where sealing the cups and labelling the name of brands of noodles occur. This is how industrial instant noodles are made.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hese discs are cooked with oil and dried . Moreover, these cooked noodles are put ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, moreover, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02994011976 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6363067687 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568862275449 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9529085647 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217628226751 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101110544549 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123083260618 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19917986325 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11940461856 0.0819641961636 146% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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