The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use

The chart gives information about different stages in the process of providing electricity by solar panels for household use.

Overall, there are 3 main steps in which electricity is produced, beginning with energy absortion of solar panels and culminating with electricity provision for house.

At the first stage of the process, solar panels, which are installed in the house roof, absorb sun energy and turn it into DC current prior to converting into AC current by a inverter, which is also used for controling the electricity and production. Subsequently, electricity panel would distribute the electricity for domestic use.

This process continue with urility meter, a device in which any excess solar electricity will flow back to the grid through the meter. Such utility grid, therefore, would provide electricity in case the host house exceed the amount provided by solar panels.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... prior to converting into AC current by a inverter, which is also used for contro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 758.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41428571429 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81942967167 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635714285714 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4584491659 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33451357424 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196584310044 0.103423049105 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113844769699 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216919312794 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754711317668 0.0819641961636 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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