The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the life cycle of a frog.

The diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a frog.
The complete life cycle of a frog experience 6 steps, begining with mating and ending with becoming a mature frog.
First of all, a female frog mate with a male one in oder to create a zygote. Mating takes place above the ground, the frogspawns are birthed into the water, which is also taken to occur the remaining steps.
During the third steps of the life cycle, the frogspawn turn into the small tadpole and develop continuously to become a bigger tadpole, which appears two back legs but still not has two forelegs. Subsequently, the complete bdy of a immature frog can be seen in the fifth steps. And finally, the frog is mature enough to be able to climb up the ground and start its new cycle like above stages as I have mentioned.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 231, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...legs. Subsequently, the complete bdy of a immature frog can be seen in the fifth ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, still, third, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 662.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50340136054 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36548914515 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625850340136 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9581910468 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5714285714 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246980323306 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124500886073 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112154814884 0.0843802449381 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188118608457 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112068986304 0.0819641961636 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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