The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).
The diagram represents four stages involving in the manufacturing of electricity making use of a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC). The process begins at the stage when the conversion of seawater takes place in two distinct environments and ends up by producing drinking water.
As can be seen from the diagram, seawater in an area of 100m depth whose temperature ranging between 5 c and 29 c from bottom to surface, respectively is transported into two tubes in which the first tube experiences the solar energy is used to convert warm seawater into water vapour, leading through to the chamber where exacuated evaporation occurs. Within this chamber, salt is exported, mixing with water and eventually wasted out of the system, meanwhile, turbine creating electricity is turned by saltless water vapor manufactured in the same chamber. After cold seawater gets delivered to condensing chamber through the second tube, together with water vapor condensed in the chamber, they create pure water for drinking purposes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33734939759 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80503042305 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698795180723 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.164881917 43.030603864 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 177.2 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195839221279 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11535796367 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18976535435 0.0843802449381 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208899598216 0.15604864568 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14574410134 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 61.2550243902 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.3012195122 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.98 8.06136585366 136% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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