The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose.

The diagrammatic representation illustrates the phases and machineries which are been used in the process of manufacturing of cement as well as the caution for using concrete for the construction.
Overall, it can be manifested that the whole production process of raw material is completed in almost five steps in number.
Firstly, at the crusher clay and limestone are been brought in order to make it in fine particle form, afterwards it comes to the rolling container which has heat applied before passing through mixer. Lastly, the product is grounded. The outcome is called cement are filled in bags for further dispatch.
Secondly, in the process of making concrete the cement is mixed up along with water in proportion of 15 percent and 10 percent *respectively*. Amount of sand in compare to small stones are half of the total portion of it. Where the former one is 25 percent while latter one is having half proportion of the total amount of mixture. Finally, everything is mixed together into the concrete mixer in order to use it for construction.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es are half of the total portion of it. Where the former one is 25 percent while latt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97191011236 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86819073919 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.9949916106 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.23603664747 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250262058867 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897686352594 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101505237844 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143541643767 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107072112244 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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