The diagram shows how alcohol is distilled through a set of apparatus

Essay topics:

The diagram shows how alcohol is distilled through a set of apparatus.

The given picture illustrates the method of alcohol distillation through a set of apparatus.

The apparatus for distilling alcohol are kept on a base. A tripod ith a flask on it is kept. A bunsen burner to heat the mixture is used and is kept under the tripod. A thermometer is fixed with the flask through a cork which is also air tight. A flask is also connected with a condenser having an input and output area for water. The condenser ends at the beaker to collect pure alcohol.

The solution of alcohol and water is filled in a flask which is kept on a tripod. The solution is heated by burner. The vapour is stopped from going out of the flask by an air tight cork and the temperature at hich the vapour is formed is noted by a thermometer.The vapour is automatically sent to the condenser by a pipe connected with the flask. The pipe is between the flow of cool water. The cold water cools the vapour and changes the vapour to liquid state.Alcohol vapour is condensed and liquid droplets are formed these droplets are droped inside a beaker and pure distilled alcohol if obtained.

Thus, with this procedure the mixture of water and alcohol can be distilled and pure alcohol is obtained. The water is burnt by the heat and alcohol is cooled by cold water is the main idea of the process.

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Average: 8 (8 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...through a cork which is also air tight. A flask is also connected with a condense...
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...d in a flask which is kept on a tripod. The solution is heated by burner. The vapou...
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...ipod. The solution is heated by burner. The vapour is stopped from going out of the...
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...our is formed is noted by a thermometer.The vapour is automatically sent to the con...
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...our is formed is noted by a thermometer.The vapour is automatically sent to the con...
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...ser by a pipe connected with the flask. The pipe is between the flow of cool water....
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...pipe is between the flow of cool water. The cold water cools the vapour and changes...
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... and changes the vapour to liquid state.Alcohol vapour is condensed and liquid droplets...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.0 329% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50210970464 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58091991509 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438818565401 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.33902439024 323% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.3839556614 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2142857143 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198849004918 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869868755893 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12024951352 0.0843802449381 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188823128277 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136678930871 0.0819641961636 167% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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