The diagram shows the life cycle of a large species of fish called the salmon.
The given diagram demonstrates the development process of the salmon.
Overall, there are obviously 3 major stages in salmon's development, starting with salmon eggs lying in the upper river and ending with adult salmon swimming in the open sea.
First, the cycle begins with salmon laying several eggs in the upper river, where the water flow is slow. The eggs are carefully hidden under the reeds, as well as covered with small stones to prevent them from becoming a food source to other larger fish and predators. Around 5 to 6 months later, those eggs hatch into small fries with the length of 3-8 cm. Then, they follow the river flow to arrive at the lower river, which has a faster flowing movement. Within the next 4 years of their lives, this river site would be their home until they grow bigger in size. By the time they are ready to leave for the open sea, the small fries will become molts with 12-15 cm in length.
Subsequently, the molts rely on the river flow to take them to the open sea, the place where they would feed and grow into adult salmon. Approximately, adult salmon can grow up to 70-76 cm in length within around 5 years. Then, the adults swim back to the upper river site where they were born to lay eggs as the cycle continues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: bigger
...ite would be their home until they grow bigger in size. By the time they are ready to leave fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1037.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52838427948 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09711582346 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572052401747 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6949803418 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2727272727 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8181818182 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106138721378 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492413158042 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504055156399 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0954722195795 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043195263321 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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