Essay topics:
the diagram shows the process of making soft cheese.
There are six steps in the dairy process that start with the raw materialand finished product is packed soft cheese.
Put the milk in the clean saucepan.
Storing milk in a low temperature at 5 C within 2 hours.
During the pasteurization step, milk is heated under high temperature and cooled to kill all harmful bacteria.
Before swift to the next step, the cold milk will be added with salt .
Then, make the Fermentation of cold milk at 37c within 6 hours.
After that, the Evaporation temperature for warm milk at 100c, which will cost 8 hours.
Finally, the best storing temperature for soft cheese is colling it at 5 c and keep the soft cheese at that tempurature for 6 hours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...cess that start with the raw materialand finished product is packed soft cheese. ...
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Suggestion: .
...p, the cold milk will be added with salt . Then, make the Fermentation of cold m...
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Suggestion:
... milk at 100c, which will cost 8 hours. Finally, the best storing temperature fo...
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...ure for soft cheese is colling it at 5 c and keep the soft cheese at that tempura...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 570.0 965.302439024 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67213114754 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65150358859 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 160.2 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6165996749 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.25 112.824112599 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111591766722 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470525240644 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711751327937 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470525240644 0.15604864568 30% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711751327937 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 61.2550243902 133% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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