The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.
Summarize the information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The process diagram illustrates the production of a fish pie and the ingredients of a fish pie.
To begin with, there are four ingredients contained in a fish pie, with peas, fish, sauce, and potato inside of the microwaveable container. In the initial stage, a one-month supply of potatoes is delivered, and these potatoes need to be cleaned, peeled and sliced. After this stage, they will continue to be boiled, chilled, and store for later use. In the following stage, fresh salmon is delivered to the manufacturer and should be prepared within 12 hours. Lemon juice and salt will be put on the top of salmon and this stage following by cooking salmon in the steam oven.
In the next stage, cooked salmon will be skinned and deboned. The skin and bones will be disposed, and the salmon will be inspected. At the final stage, prepared peas, sauce, potato, and processed salmon will be wrapped and put into the container for freezing and storing until being dispatched.
Overall, there are four stages in this systematic process and four ingredients will be added to a fish pie.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85483870968 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57032546854 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52688172043 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.482926829268 1035% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3736276275 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0516987002822 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283788199426 0.103423049105 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401598883767 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518213006189 0.15604864568 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436917448124 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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