The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth

Essay topics:

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

The set of diagram illustrate the stages of the silkworm's life as well as the step by step process of making silk clothes.

The first process is the emerging process. Form the eggs, the silkworm is emerged with wings. After 10 days, from the mulberry leaf, the silkworm larva is transpired. It future process in the silk thread in upcoming 4 to 6 weeks. The next production is the cocoon which takes up to 8 days. This cocoon is the final outcome. Afterwards again in 16 days the cocoon emerges moth. And the moment the moth gives eggs, the process continues.

Now cocoon will be taken for further production. Firstly the cocoon are boil in boiler with the liquid water. Then by unwind the cocoon. The threads is made by twisting the boiled cocoon, it may long about 300-900m. The dying process is done after threading and the dye is now on the threads of cocoon.

This is how the silk clothes process had done by cyclic and non cyclic process.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'silkworms'' or 'silkworm's'?
Suggestion: silkworms'; silkworm's
...of diagram illustrate the stages of the silkworms life as well as the step by step proces...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
... Then by unwind the cocoon. The threads is made by twisting the boiled cocoon, it ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, then, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57894736842 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26172945537 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584795321637 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.8420664564 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.2 112.824112599 46% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.4 22.9334400587 50% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 4.09268292683 342% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133816569602 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407510544468 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674301081795 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107297688432 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0950312838623 0.0819641961636 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.2329268293 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 10.3012195122 39% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.1 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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