The diagrams below show The life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant Write at least 150 words

Essay topics:

The diagrams below show The life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

The first diagrams describes the different stages of a silkworm during its life cycle. The second diagram shows how to produce silk cloth from cocoon, one of the development stages of silkworm.

Overall, there are five stages in a silkworm's life cycle, beginning with eggs hatching and ending with the development of a moth. To produce silk cloth, there are four main stages from choosing cocoons to weaving.

Beginning with the life cycle of silkworm, within 10 days eggs hatch and silkworm larvae emerge. A larva should be fed on mulberry leaf between 4 and 6 weeks until it can release silk thread around itself to make a cocoon. A cocoon then will be shell cut open within 16 days and a moth comes out at the fifth stage. The moth mate, lay eggs and a new life cycle of silk worm starts again.

Silk cloth can be made in simple way beginning with selecting cocoons. Cocoons then will be boiled in water at the second step before unwinding to have silk threads. Threads may reach 300 to 900 meters long each item and are now ready to be twisted together and dyed in oder for the production of silk cloth in weaving stage.

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Average: 5.3 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'describe'.
Suggestion: describe
The first diagrams describes the different stages of a silkworm duri...
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Line 3, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'silkworms'' or 'silkworm's'?
Suggestion: silkworms'; silkworm's
... Overall, there are five stages in a silkworms life cycle, beginning with eggs hatchin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57843137255 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21514395584 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7858312045 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254951376099 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105841879871 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451215754286 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167645390271 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410243633455 0.0819641961636 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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