The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Given are the diagrams vividly demonstrate the process of the entire life of a species of large fish - salmon. Overall, they includes the period from eggs to adult salmons.
First of all, according to the diagrams, the eggs are laid at the downside of reeds and around small stones where the flow here is in a slow moving. After 5-6 months, eggs hatch and grow up into fries which shape in the length of 3-8cm. Hence, they migrate to the lower level of rivers in which the stream is fast. And they gradually grow up and become bigger during 4 years they live here. At this stage, they take shape in the length of 12-15cm. In the final step, they are able to enter into the open sea and cope with the waves which caused by the turbulent stream. After 5 years, they grow up completely and their length reach to 70-76cm.
To sum up, the life cycle of salmons shown in the diagrams consists of 4 stages within which eggs turn into mature fishes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the period from eggs to adult salmons. First of all, according to the diagram...
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...d small stones where the flow here is in a slow moving. After 5-6 months, eggs ha...
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...ly and their length reach to 70-76cm. To sum up, the life cycle of salmons ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41142857143 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01351323243 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2439737382 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.2 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972834367577 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427612791492 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709907505927 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0998672333367 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563475900882 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 11.4140731707 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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