Essay topics: The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

Essay topics: The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given bar charts illustrate landing-places of UK graduate and postgraduate students, excepting full-time career. Unit of measurement is number of students.

To begin with, there were more graduate than postgraduate scholars in UK, but the proportion of destinations of the students from both degrees was virtually the same. The most popular choice was to pursue further education, while only few of them interested in working as volunteers.

With regards to number of students who decided to study more, it almost reached 30,000 for the graduates, but, among the postgraduates, there was only 2,725 people who did so. Furthermore, the second attractive option, working part-time, was accounted for approximately one-third of total graduate students, just like the postgraduates. And there were around 16,000 graduate scholars unemployed in that year, and among the postgraduates, more than 1,600 people left the college without any job.

In contrast, only 3,500 graduates and 345 postgraduates joined voluntary work, which was ranked as the least preference from overall students.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'furthermore', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'while', 'as to', 'in contrast', 'to begin with']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255319148936 0.268076937826 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.127659574468 0.116061578633 110% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851063829787 0.0759168565197 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0531914893617 0.0366838410393 145% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0106382978723 0.0131127313244 81% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143617021277 0.155750635184 92% => OK
Participles: 0.031914893617 0.0379272487307 84% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.08363009114 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212765957447 0.0210936926555 101% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0797872340426 0.0948980150116 84% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0159574468085 0.00967000014798 165% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1092.0 1161.00487805 94% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.9 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.65853658537 5.90752243213 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.414634146341 0.337110787985 123% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.329268292683 0.247514529752 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25 0.171178102325 146% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.201219512195 0.112407865282 179% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08363009114 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664634146341 0.546246751206 122% => OK
Word variations: 66.1829331082 49.3433353143 134% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 20.5 23.0094962315 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4969134626 42.9750493124 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.5 135.714022679 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 23.0094962315 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 0.689975730869 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 53.4268292683 47.7609492067 112% => OK
Elegance: 2.25 2.94281807926 76% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309576354474 0.418131533498 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.120804669919 0.181151798455 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0196150755 0.0850326197045 23% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.713252672248 0.706616315825 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138201591451 0.157042692854 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155244786813 0.228904883108 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0782210908704 0.108899403657 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.286312675351 0.367819155151 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0811693393703 0.0812612215331 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200655731573 0.316326947829 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392831740203 0.0921553760075 43% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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