The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.

The graph gives information regarding the average monthly spending on children's sports by British parents between 2008 and 2014 in pounds and participation of children in their different sports in Britain over the same period.

Graph 1 shows money spent on children's sports by British parents in 2008 is 20 pounds which rose gradually to 25 pounds and around 27 pounds in 2010 and 2012 respectively before reaching the peak of around 33 pounds in 2014.

Graph 2 shows that the participation of children in football was around 7.6 millions in 2008, which remained constant till 2010 with a slight increase in 2012 of around 8 million and remained constant till 2014. On the otherhand, Athletics were lowest of around 1 million which remained similar in number in 2010 and eventually inclined to 5 million in 2012 with slight decline of around 4.8 million in 2014. Whereas, participants in swimming in 2008 was around 2.4 million which rose steadily to 2.5 and around 2.8 million in 2010 and 2012 respectively and reached the peak of 4 million in 2014.

In conclusion, expenditure on sports increased in Britain as number of participants increased.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'regarding', 'whereas', 'in conclusion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212871287129 0.268076937826 79% => OK
Verbs: 0.0990099009901 0.116061578633 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0594059405941 0.0759168565197 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.029702970297 0.0366838410393 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0049504950495 0.0131127313244 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.232673267327 0.155750635184 149% => OK
Participles: 0.029702970297 0.0379272487307 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7685610984 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0148514851485 0.0210936926555 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.039603960396 0.0948980150116 42% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.019801980198 0.00967000014798 205% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1154.0 1161.00487805 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.9 98% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01041666667 5.90752243213 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40625 0.337110787985 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.286458333333 0.247514529752 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.182291666667 0.171178102325 106% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0989583333333 0.112407865282 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7685610984 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473958333333 0.546246751206 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.5916534731 49.3433353143 80% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 8.93414634146 67% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0094962315 139% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6430285711 42.9750493124 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 192.333333333 135.714022679 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 23.0094962315 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.666666666667 0.689975730869 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 60.6458333333 47.7609492067 127% => OK
Elegance: 3.55555555556 2.94281807926 121% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424101706809 0.418131533498 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.353986769997 0.181151798455 195% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.137612086876 0.0850326197045 162% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.922875121283 0.706616315825 131% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.078329276983 0.157042692854 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.279565321056 0.228904883108 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150368199835 0.108899403657 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.359469318828 0.367819155151 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0797832618864 0.0812612215331 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.324457147219 0.316326947829 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16865002491 0.0921553760075 183% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70731707317 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 3.16585365854 126% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 6.0 7.1512195122 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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