The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of the household energy use and the proportion of greenhouse gas emissions from various types of energy use in an average household in Australia. Units are measured in percent.
Overall, while the largest amount of energy use is for heating, water heating emission is the biggest portion of greenhouse gas emissions among those of 6 Australian household appliances. In contrast, cooling appliance both consumes least energy and emits least greenhouse gas to environment.
With regard to the percentage of energy use for heating, it is accounted for 42% of total energy used in the typically Australian household, following by 30% and 15% of water heating and other devices respectively. Nevertheless, unlike water heating, which produces one-third of the greenhouse gas emission, and other appliance, which produces 28% of that emission, heating creates greenhouse gas emission only 15% of the total amount.
On the other hand, the least percentage of energy used is for cooling and lighting, which uses only 2% and 3% of the total consumption respectively. Moreover, those two types of household generate relatively small proportion of the gas that cause environment problems: they create 11% of the whole emission.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'consumes the least'.
Suggestion: consumes the least
...es. In contrast, cooling appliance both consumes least energy and emits least greenhouse gas t...
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Line 3, column 251, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'emits the least'.
Suggestion: emits the least
...ppliance both consumes least energy and emits least greenhouse gas to environment. With ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['moreover', 'nevertheless', 'third', 'while', 'as to', 'in contrast', 'with regard to', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.356828193833 0.268076937826 133% => OK
Verbs: 0.0925110132159 0.116061578633 80% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0748898678414 0.0759168565197 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0308370044053 0.0366838410393 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00881057268722 0.0131127313244 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149779735683 0.155750635184 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0440528634361 0.0379272487307 116% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95477694502 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00881057268722 0.0210936926555 42% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0881057268722 0.0948980150116 93% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0176211453744 0.00967000014798 182% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1268.0 1161.00487805 109% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.9 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.43654822335 5.90752243213 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73763899035 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.401015228426 0.337110787985 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.340101522843 0.247514529752 137% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.274111675127 0.171178102325 160% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.213197969543 0.112407865282 190% => Too many words length more than 8 chars.
Word Length SD: 2.95477694502 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502538071066 0.546246751206 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.1528865767 49.3433353143 87% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 24.625 23.0094962315 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1606657755 42.9750493124 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.5 135.714022679 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.625 23.0094962315 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.689975730869 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 58.6351522843 47.7609492067 123% => OK
Elegance: 4.16666666667 2.94281807926 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39281444169 0.418131533498 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145835059993 0.181151798455 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.10284772184 0.0850326197045 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.690758118082 0.706616315825 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191309074223 0.157042692854 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.222511541896 0.228904883108 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123210600607 0.108899403657 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.469800135856 0.367819155151 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0626686580681 0.0812612215331 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318788744059 0.316326947829 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607323188528 0.0921553760075 66% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.14146341463 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.08536585366 24% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 0.956097560976 209% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.