The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Essay topics:

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

In the diagrams right above is described the distribution of energy among Australian house’s appliances and the correlation between them and gas emissions in an Australian household greenhouse.

In an Australian household, heating and water heating, respectively, absorb together around the 70% of the total amount of energy. Refrigeration, instead, manage to cover just the 7% of usage. Processes such as lighting and cooling are barely up to 5% if gathered in an unique data. And the remanence of energy is used to satisfy other appliances energy’s requirement.

On the other chart, instead other appliances and water heating challenge for the first place, in contrast to the trend of the first diagram. Refrigeration, even here, emits more gas than cooling respectively 14% and 3%. Process of heating, just supplies the 15% of the total gas emitted. Contribute of lighting underwent to an increase if compared with the first chart, jumping from a 4% of usage of electricity to an 8% in the gas emission.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 268, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ling are barely up to 5% if gathered in an unique data. And the remanence of energ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'in contrast to']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.3 0.268076937826 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.08 0.116061578633 69% => OK
Adjectives: 0.075 0.0759168565197 99% => OK
Adverbs: 0.055 0.0366838410393 150% => OK
Pronouns: 0.005 0.0131127313244 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.15 0.155750635184 96% => OK
Participles: 0.04 0.0379272487307 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.12263592911 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Infinitives: 0.03 0.0210936926555 142% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.105 0.0948980150116 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1022.0 1161.00487805 88% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.9 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23170731707 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.384146341463 0.337110787985 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.310975609756 0.247514529752 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.25 0.171178102325 146% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.164634146341 0.112407865282 146% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12263592911 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591463414634 0.546246751206 108% => OK
Word variations: 52.0338843451 49.3433353143 105% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.2222222222 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.650124093 42.9750493124 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.555555556 135.714022679 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 23.0094962315 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 0.689975730869 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 49.3197831978 47.7609492067 103% => OK
Elegance: 3.5 2.94281807926 119% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374548673095 0.418131533498 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132917256738 0.181151798455 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.110271892524 0.0850326197045 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.597940186689 0.706616315825 85% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.209320064269 0.157042692854 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182838401884 0.228904883108 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106546610871 0.108899403657 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.471736637102 0.367819155151 128% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.059281952239 0.0812612215331 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.304082671954 0.316326947829 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447915196544 0.0921553760075 49% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70731707317 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 3.16585365854 190% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 3.02926829268 33% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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