The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

Essay topics:

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The charts represent the proportion of average energy used for six household goods and the amount of greenhouse gas emissions resulting from the energy usage in Australia.
Overall, the highest energy using appliances have produced fewer greenhouse gas emissions except for water heating. Australian household used lesser energies for cooling and lighting which also produced the least greenhouse gas emissions.
The majority of Australian household used energies for heating purposes (of 42%), this produced the least gas emissions of 15% in comparison to its usage. Meanwhile, cooling used 2% of energies and 4% energies used for lighting in Australia and which produced 3% and 8% of greenhouse gas emissions respectively.
In terms of heating, which produced the most greenhouse gas emissions of 32% in compared to 42% of its energy used. Also, 15% of Australian household used energies for other appliances and which produced 28% of greenhouse gas emissions. Lastly, there was the third least energy used for refrigeration of 7% in Australia, which released 14% of gas emissions.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'lastly', 'so', 'third', 'while', 'except for']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.34693877551 0.268076937826 129% => OK
Verbs: 0.132653061224 0.116061578633 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0612244897959 0.0759168565197 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.030612244898 0.0366838410393 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0102040816327 0.0131127313244 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.147959183673 0.155750635184 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0867346938776 0.0379272487307 229% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.88230676849 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0102040816327 0.0210936926555 48% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0561224489796 0.0948980150116 59% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0255102040816 0.00967000014798 264% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1084.0 1161.00487805 93% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.9 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.41420118343 5.90752243213 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73763899035 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.408284023669 0.337110787985 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.349112426036 0.247514529752 141% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.313609467456 0.171178102325 183% => Too many words length more than 7 chars.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.195266272189 0.112407865282 174% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88230676849 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455621301775 0.546246751206 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 35.9807866129 49.3433353143 73% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 21.125 23.0094962315 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.5635448063 42.9750493124 48% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.5 135.714022679 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 23.0094962315 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.689975730869 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 56.0362426036 47.7609492067 117% => OK
Elegance: 3.35294117647 2.94281807926 114% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337530459197 0.418131533498 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.247860361204 0.181151798455 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0599176327379 0.0850326197045 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.789802983533 0.706616315825 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0857561099068 0.157042692854 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221506040984 0.228904883108 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843083727526 0.108899403657 77% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.50161667782 0.367819155151 136% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.165879111663 0.0812612215331 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288237396382 0.316326947829 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778171706267 0.0921553760075 84% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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