The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts represent the proportion of energy used for six different consumer goods in Australia and its greenhouse gas emission production rates.
Overall, Australian households used the most of their energy in heating, water heating and other appliances. Of two of three, the latter two has the most impact on greenhouse effect. Cooling and lighting consumed minimal energy and contributed the least on greenhouse gas emissions.
Majority of Australian household used its energy sources for heating (of 42%), followed by water heating of 30% and other appliances of 15%. In terms of greenhouse gas emissions, the majority of emissions derived from water heating of 32%. Other appliances produced almost double the gases of 28% and heating had the least impact on greenhouse of 15%.
Cooling, lighting and refrigeration were accounted for the least energy usages by Australian households of 2%, 4% and 15% respectively. The first two had released the minimal greenhouse gas emissions of 3% and 8% respectively. In contrast, refrigeration produced twice the greenhouse gas emissions in comparison to its energy use.
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.35960591133 0.268076937826 134% => OK
Verbs: 0.0886699507389 0.116061578633 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0788177339901 0.0759168565197 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0295566502463 0.0366838410393 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0197044334975 0.0131127313244 150% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142857142857 0.155750635184 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0443349753695 0.0379272487307 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98963837953 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00492610837438 0.0210936926555 23% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.064039408867 0.0948980150116 67% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1119.0 1161.00487805 96% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.9 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.43103448276 5.90752243213 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.425287356322 0.337110787985 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.33908045977 0.247514529752 137% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.275862068966 0.171178102325 161% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.195402298851 0.112407865282 174% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98963837953 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48275862069 0.546246751206 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 39.0710381603 49.3433353143 79% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.8137571271 42.9750493124 51% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9 135.714022679 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 51.308045977 47.7609492067 107% => OK
Elegance: 3.96428571429 2.94281807926 135% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374066359998 0.418131533498 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.179845813876 0.181151798455 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0716975553542 0.0850326197045 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.685317180525 0.706616315825 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12433447211 0.157042692854 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227293768906 0.228904883108 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701165201048 0.108899403657 64% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.424144692278 0.367819155151 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0919614466989 0.0812612215331 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307656185136 0.316326947829 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789227799994 0.0921553760075 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.