The former given is a figure concerning how energy is used in Australian household. The latter provided,meanwhile, is a pie comparing the proportion of greenhouse gas emissions resulting from the energy use.
First of all, it is apparent that heating, which is consuming the largest energy, accounting for 42 percent--- approximately half of overall proportion of energy use, contribute to a mere 15 percent of greenhouses gas emissions. Also noteworthy is the fact that second with regard to energy consumption is water heating, standing at 30 percent which is double that caused by other appliances. But conversely, They are similar in percentage of producing greenhouse gases, both of which stand at approximately 30 percent . Refrigeration and lighting have moderate levels of producing greenhouse gases with 7 percent and 4 percent relatively. Nevertheless, both of percentage are double when it comes to greenhouse gases emissions. Finally, with the minimum 2 percent of consumption of energy, cooling, meanwhile, releases 3 percent of harmful gases.
By the way of conclusion, heating is the most environmentally-friendly appliance while water heating not only burns off a vast amount of energy, but also is detrimental to atmosphere.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also,
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... to greenhouse gases emissions. Finally, with the minimum 2 percent of consumptio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, nevertheless, second, so, while, by the way, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48958333333 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35982297556 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0504760978 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.111111111 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4444444444 5.23603664747 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221716012718 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103958519129 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108636246956 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172112758509 0.15604864568 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165831287077 0.0819641961636 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => It means the essay is relatively harder to read.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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