Forested Land [Ielts task 1]

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Forested Land [Ielts task 1]

The table compares and contrasts data on the amount of forested land in 6 areas over a period of 16 years.

At the on set, it is clear that there is a slight decrease in the total amount of forested land in most of the mainlands, with an exception for Asia and Europe. We can also see that timbered areas in Europe and South America were significantly higher than that in other areas.

As can be seen in the table, in 1990, both South America and Europe have around 950 ha woodland. The figure for Africa and North America stood at around four fifth that amount. Oceania had the lowest amount of woodland at the same time.

By 2005, the amount of wooded land in Europe rose steadily, reached a peak at 1001 ha. That is also the highest figure in the table. Forested land in Asia also rose slightly by 8 ha. By contrast, woodland in Africa and South America dropped moderately while forested areas in Oceania and North America remained unchanged.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... a period of 16 years. At the on set, it is clear that there is a slight decre...
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...ested land in Asia also rose slightly by 8 ha. By contrast, woodland in Africa a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5549132948 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2692113294 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543352601156 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8643276809 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152148863007 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705716516665 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835030256247 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113115916582 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711537127837 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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