The graph and bar chart below show the average monthly rainfall and temperature for one region of East Africa.
A glance at the graph and bar chart reveals the rate of rainfall and temperature, perspectively, every month for a particular area of East Africa.
On balance, the figures for both rain and temperature not only follow a volatile pattern but also reach the minimum threshold in July.
From January to March, the temperature rate sees a gradual rise to climb up to its peak, at nearly 23.5 degrees whereas, the rain rate remains the same level in first two month before increasing four-time in March, at approximate 100 millimeters. In April, the rate of rainfall jumps up to the maximum level, at over 250 millimeters, conversely, that of temperature decreases slightly by 0.5 degrees.
In the next three months, figures for both rain and temperature see a marked decrease to reach its bottom, at 10 millimeters and 21 degrees. The temperature rate continues fluctuating in remained month and reach its peak again before decreasing to 22 degrees. At the same time, the rain rate still remains under 100 millimeters except in October and November with nearly 150 millimeters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ate remains the same level in first two month before increasing four-time in March, a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, so, still, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05027932961 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87247554523 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8604709312 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177974345494 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985633788477 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107155661856 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14185101221 0.15604864568 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122299211542 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.