The graph below shows the Alcohol related deaths in 7 different countries and the average beer consumption in 2005

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the Alcohol-related deaths in 7 different countries and the average beer consumption in 2005.

The given table compares the amount of deaths related to alcohol in 7 different countries as well as the average consumption of beer in 2005.
It is clear from the table that Czech Republic had the highest amount of Alcohol-related deaths and males seemed to have more consequences drinking too much beer. Similarly, beers consumed be the Czechs also stayed in the first place compared to other countries in the period given.
The record shows that there were 1,369,000 Alcohol-related deaths in Czech Republic, followed by 1,185,000 in Germany. The country which had the least passed away alcoholic was Lithuania, just only 125,000 cases reported. Furthermore, the number of male drinkers were more than ten times compared to the female ones.
As the date stated above, Czech Republic certainly had the most beer consumption, around 132 liters per year, followed by Germany and Austria, 107 and 106 liters respectively. On the other hand, Canadian were considered to consumed the lowest amount of beers, only 86 liters in 2002.

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Average: 7.8 (5 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, similarly, so, well, as well as, in the first place, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71905908596 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64880952381 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3484460253 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.23603664747 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296044316123 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13180769568 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163974541302 0.0843802449381 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21791759753 0.15604864568 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.191758930551 0.0819641961636 234% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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