The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2004

Essay topics:

The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2004.

The bar chart reveals the comparison information about elephants population between 1994 and 2007 in the Asia.

Overall, the number of elephants had decreased in all the Asian countries instead of China and Cambodia. India had carried maximum number of elephants however it also had seen significant decreased in the elephants' population.

In 1997, India and Myanmar were leading countries in Asia around 10000 and 5000 respectively and India had seen decrease almost 2500 while in Myanmar the population decreased near to negligible from 1997 to 2004. Malaysia and Thailand had decreased the sum of elephant more half in comparison of 1997. In Sri Lanka the number of elephants was more 2500 through the period and seen small decrease moreover Vietnam has the 50% of Sir Lanka. Laos was only a country with stable number population.

In China, the number of elephant in 1997 was 500 and it increased around 1000 elephants over the time while Cambodia had notice minimum increase over the years.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'elephants'' or 'elephant's'?
Suggestion: elephants'; elephant's
...o had seen significant decreased in the elephants population. In 1997, India and Myanm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12804878049 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58101192289 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548780487805 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6918267136 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.125 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201319342908 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986959083546 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515165839175 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134433658787 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472445587076 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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