The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors-agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services- to the UK economy in the twentieth century.
The bar chart illustrates the changes in the proportion of the contribution for three selected sectors to the UK economy and this survey conducted from 1900 to 2000.
To begin with, agriculture started at the highest proportion of 50% of three countries and continued to reach its peak at 52% in the next fifty years. Afterward, this figure dropped dramatically to nearly 1% in 2000.
As the percentage of manufacturing, it experienced a gradual decline, with the figure decreasing from 47% in 1900 to 15% in 2000. Turing to the proportion of business and financial, an inverse trend was recorded in comparison to the trend for manufacturing. The was a notable growth from 1900 to 2000, when the figure increased from 3% to 40%.
Overall, from 1900 to 1950, agriculture and manufacturing are the main contributions to the UK economy. During the period 1975 to 2000, business and financial overtook their place and became the major factor of economic growth in the UK.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...n the figure increased from 3% to 40%. Overall, from 1900 to 1950, agriculture ...
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...or factor of economic growth in the UK.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00613496933 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98252907687 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570552147239 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1485854414 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156259785434 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653840238947 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058044181896 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101826342787 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634720302758 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.