The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

Essay topics:

The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

The bar chart depicts the percentage of female unemployment in four countries of the United Kingdom in both years 2013 and 2014. Overall, It is clear that the proportion of unemployed females in Scotland rose slightly, while the figure for remaining countries fell. It also mentions that, in 2014, Scotland had the highest level of female jobless.

To begin, in 2013, 6.8% of women in England did not have a job. This figure then dropped steadily to 6.5% of unemployed females in 2014. In contrast, standing at a lower proportion, at 6.1% in 2013, the number of women who were unemployed in Scotland increased to 6.7% in 2014. Scotland, therefore, had the highest number of the female unemployment rate over the period of 2 years.

As can be seen from the graph, both Wales and Northen Ireland saw a similar female unemployment rate. In 2013, 5.4% of women in Wales and 5.6 % of women in Northen Ireland were unemployed. By a year later, the figures for both countries had fallen to 5.0% and 4.6% of unemployed females respectively.

Votes
Average: 9 (2 votes)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'in contrast']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.261904761905 0.268076937826 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.109523809524 0.116061578633 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0571428571429 0.0759168565197 75% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0380952380952 0.0366838410393 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00952380952381 0.0131127313244 73% => OK
Prepositions: 0.17619047619 0.155750635184 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0285714285714 0.0379272487307 75% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69353705182 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0190476190476 0.0210936926555 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0952380952381 0.0948980150116 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0047619047619 0.00437022459523 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0047619047619 0.00967000014798 49% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1037.0 1161.00487805 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.9 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.79329608939 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.329608938547 0.337110787985 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.245810055866 0.247514529752 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.162011173184 0.171178102325 95% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.117318435754 0.112407865282 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69353705182 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558659217877 0.546246751206 102% => OK
Word variations: 48.7659416185 49.3433353143 99% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9 23.0094962315 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4864669972 42.9750493124 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.7 135.714022679 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 23.0094962315 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.689975730869 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 42.4810055866 47.7609492067 89% => OK
Elegance: 2.9696969697 2.94281807926 101% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.529703177098 0.418131533498 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.174491300758 0.181151798455 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0540181138994 0.0850326197045 64% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.6146942304 0.706616315825 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.102969846383 0.157042692854 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.257880247039 0.228904883108 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120510875652 0.108899403657 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.474848747342 0.367819155151 129% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0581075739505 0.0812612215331 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.410643881681 0.316326947829 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639081078375 0.0921553760075 69% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.08536585366 98% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 0.956097560976 418% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.02926829268 132% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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