The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in
Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5.
The line graph illustrates people who used railways in UK from 1950 to 2004/5. The general view is that although National rail network and London Underground had a considerable decrease to 600 million and 500 million respectively in 1980, there was a reach a peak at 1050 and 1000 in turn.
To specify, in 1950, National rail network had remain stable next a half of decade. Having rocketed to a high of 1000, there was a slight decrease to next twenty years period between 1955 and 1975, while the number of passenger who used London Underground almost remained unchanged approximately 700 million...
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there was a reach a peak at 1050 and 1000 in turn.
there was a peak at 1050 and 1000 in turn.
Sentence: To specify, in 1950, National rail network had remain stable next a half of decade.
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it had upward trend
it had a upward trend
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