The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK

Essay topics:

The graph below shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK

The graph illustrates the percentage households in UK using up-to-date equipment over the years.

There are four basic trends: Internet access, home computer, mobile phone and CD player. Overall, it can be obviously seen that these 4 of trends has risen during years. As regards the first, until 1998/99 did the Internet access show up with almost 10% and increase to more than 40% in 2002/03. In contrast, home computer and mobile phone was appeared in 1998/99 and both was more and more popular in 2002/03. The former has been gradually grown from over 20% to nearly 60% and the latter began with only 20% and hit the highest point of 65% in 2002/03. 1998/99 witnessed a high well-liked of CD player with 60% of people using it in 1998/99 and there was no sign of popularity reduction with more than 80% in 2002/03.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, well, as regards, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 676.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69444444444 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36534546781 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 183.6 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.277776664 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5714285714 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873685143626 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483722212491 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520565563497 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0991185587481 0.15604864568 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459219235107 0.0819641961636 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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