The graph provides information about changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK.
In 1998/99 year Internet access became successful. It has increase from 15% to 43% in 2003/03 year. By the contrast CD player wich became popular in 1996/7 year was steady fell from 60% to all 81/82%. In 2002/2003 year the former technology had the highest percetages of all technology.
Home computer was popular in 1996/97 year and had upward from 29% to 38% in 2002/03 year. The mobile phone had more percentages that the former technology. Mobile phone fluctuated in 1996/97 from 19% to 1998/99 was about 29%, in this year with home computer had 38%.
The next high percentage of mobile phone is 42%. In 2000/01 had gradually upward to 67%. And in 2002/2003 year mobile phone fell steadily to 70%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86428571429 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49361429353 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 179.1 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.0539808351 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.9090909091 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7272727273 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119525053542 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619033064953 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127555055783 0.0843802449381 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137972453495 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186696978533 0.0819641961636 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.2329268293 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 61.2550243902 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.