The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries

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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The line chart describes the percentage of people who are aged of 65 or above between 1940 to 2040 in three countries.
It is true that the populations who are at the age 65 and over in three countries rise significantly. In the future, people 65 years old in Japan will take the highest proportion among three nations.
First of all, nearly 10% of the population in the USA were 65 years old and above in 1940 then this figure was followed by Sweden to 7% and 5% for Japan. Secondly, There was an increase of American people aged 65 and over to 15% in 1980 then remained stable this number until 2020 before increasing dramatically to nearly 25% at 2040. Thirdly, Sweden's people who are around 65 or above rose gradually to 20% in 2015 but decreased slightly to 17% in 5 years later. However, there will be a notable increase to 25% in the percentage of Sweden's population about 65 or older in 2040. Lastly, Japanese citizens aged 65 and higher decreased a bit by 2% in 1980 but this percentage was recovered to 5% in 2000 then rose gradually to 10% in 2010. In addition, this number will continue to reach a peek to 27% in the next 30 years in the future.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, then, third, thirdly, in addition, first of all, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.37037037037 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5085587378 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523148148148 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1784437356 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.888888889 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 5.23603664747 233% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280029747877 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129802921233 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995867553931 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241940759209 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669169529729 0.0819641961636 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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